(TS)When summer ends don’t you always think about how great the next one will be? (SD) After a summer ends it takes a while to get back in the swing of things back at school. (CM) It might be frustrating and also very annoying. (CM) You should always think of that one day that you were laying on the warm soft sand thinking I might never go back to school. (SD) It will always be hard to get back to school with all the changes in you’re day. (CM) I hate the feeling of coming back to school. (CM) I do not like waking up early to do work ,and I don’t like when summer ends to me its a big count down. (SD In the summer time, “ all that’s said will be done.” (SD) It is so sad when all of you’re summer friends go back to where they live to begin school. (CM) Knowing that you won’t see them for a whole year you hang out with kids from school. (CM) Then you start a whole new bond which lasts forever. (CS) Summer is one of the greatest times of you’re life and the harder you work in school the better the time you’ve earned is.
Self assessment
One thing I have trouble with while writing is sticking to the topic.
A strong piece of my essay is how all the words flow together.
One of my weaknesses is making sure the grammar and spelling is correct.
Self grade = B+.
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