First body paragraph about love
By: Harry Staley
Have you ever thought about what your love life might be like in ten years or so? In about ten years from now most of the kids in our English class might have found their true loves. It could be an old friend or maybe someone that was more than a friend when you were a teenager. It is even possible that children in our class could meet again and fall in love with another and get married. I believe romance is one of those things that will just come to me. I believe that one day off in the future I will have an encounter with an old friend, maybe someone from this school, and ask them out on a date. After a few dates, I might begin to date this girl, even if it is somebody that I am not very fond of today. I believe that love will slowly but surely make its way to me.
I liked how you used an echo word in a sentence that means the opposite of the word! (Fond)
ReplyDeletenext time you should put the first two chunks in the introductory because it was talking more about love in general than the love you will experience. you could also go into more detail with how do people get love( is it found, built,etc?)
-Eman