(TS) In my life I have meet many weird and strange people. (SD) Out of all these people there was one that really stood out to me. (CM) His name is Ian and he likes to tie his face up with a rope. (CM) I think this is strange because to most people this would hurt, but to Ian it is an amusing event he likes to do. (SD) When I first meet Ian he was acting very strange, so strange I tried to stay away from him. (CM) I couldn’t stay away from him for long because after a couple minutes I was forced to sail with him. (CM) It was the most outrageous sail of my life. (SD)With every line on the boat he tried to tie his face up. (CM) I don’t exactly know how he did it but he did and I was amazed. (CM) I didn’t know what to think except for, what is he doing or, what is wrong with him. (CS) Of course Ian and I became close friends over the summer and now I miss his tied up face.
Great paragraph Harry, but I recommend indenting on the first line of the paragraph. Your concluding sentence made me lol. Litterally! :D
ReplyDeleteo.0 woah. i like it, it has your own flair . it also sounds as if your talking to me! don't forget some spellin' and indenting.
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OOPs! i just remembered, That last sentence was funny, i wish i could write like that...
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