TS (Main Idea, Topic, or Thesis) This experience at Nature center changed me dramatically.
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SD Working with animals changed me dramatically, because I understand animals more
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CM I now try not to hurt them
CM I want to help if in need
SD I now look at animals differently, because I now know a lot about them and how to help them
CM If an Animal is hurt; feel I need to help, because of how much I’ve been around them
CM after my time at the nature center I learned wut to do if an animal is hurt and now, feel I can help an injured animal
SD I also developed a liking for working with kids
CM on my first visit I worked with kids and I really liked it
CM I want to work with kids more often
CS I love the nature center and I have learned a lot from it
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