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TS (Main Idea, Topic, or Thesis) three difficulties at nature center communication, rules, and familiarity, and location of materials

Bell word-Difficulties

SD had hard time emailing with them

Echo word to be used- problems

 CM, had to go to the place

CM had to make a special visit

SD Even with tour, didn’t know where anything was

CM animal feeding is hard, because couldn’t find food

CM Buddy system helped

SD Have to have parent

CM parent is an inconvenience- without parent can’t feed

CM “to dangerous” animals are unpredictable

CS the more I go the more I learn, but still an inconvenience because parent has to stay the whole time